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Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

0 posted 2000-08-04 06:51 AM


Your eyes watch the dark
Why don't you sleep in the night
If you are so wise?

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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-08-04 07:47 PM


Because we're all too addicted to Passions to go to sleep at a reasonable hour and then we're over-tired and can't get to sleep!  

Denise

wordancer
Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809
VA
2 posted 2000-08-04 10:08 PM


. . .because he knows that the night is the best of all for watching the shadows of the world emerge.

Lady Nogs

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
3 posted 2000-08-05 03:29 AM


This is so clever, bro. He's wise and can
stay up cause he can sleep in the morning,
there isn't a job or a clock to punch, like the rest of us dummies! I love this one! Sis

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

dgvarner
Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
4 posted 2000-08-05 08:31 AM


LOL..i love this one!  

denise is right--he stays up too late addicted to passions!  BUT eL is right too--he can do that because he's the hoot owl, and doesnt have to go to work in the morn!!  

very neat..i just love it!

dg


"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran


deleeme
Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
5 posted 2000-08-05 04:26 PM


If He is so wise
Why does he not recognize
E'er asking "Who, Who?"

Keep 'em coming--Who's Counting!  David


"GOD GIVES- but man must open his hand." (German Proverb)


Alle'cram
Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
6 posted 2000-08-05 04:43 PM


Hi Dennis, Really liked this one, thought I would have some fun with it too.

Disguised as a light
The wise one can not be seen
With the sun so bright

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