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Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
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0 posted 2000-08-03 02:06 PM


Your lips brush mine
Fiery bolts charge my soul
Your taste melts my heart
Scent overpowers my senses
Your warmth enfolds me
My barriers are broken
Reality recedes back
In to the realms
Of make believe
And from the shadows
Of desire
Floods of feelings
Caress my pain
Come sweet spirit
Gentle one
Take my hand
Through this cold night
Shatter my negativity
Confound my doubt
Hold suspended
My disbelief
Show me the way
Lift my longing
And expel all
Loneliness
Show me things
Only you can see
Bury me in your love

Jon Mewett

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Lady Lost
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since 2000-07-13
Posts 470

1 posted 2000-08-03 04:04 PM


W*O*W..this is truly one of the most Amazing poems I have ever read, Jon....Your words have penetrated my heart.  You write so beautifully, your words are so perfect.........beth

You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
2 posted 2000-08-03 05:11 PM


Very tender beautiful piece Jon. wonderful images as well.

"I am melancholy, flower cutting through stone"
manic street preachers

Denise
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3 posted 2000-08-03 08:42 PM


Very beautiful piece of writing, Jon, but that comes as no surprise to me!  

Denise

serenity blaze
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4 posted 2000-08-04 12:43 PM


Beautiful and so gently loving...a whisper of a poem, Jon.
Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
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5 posted 2000-08-04 08:57 AM


Thanx everybody  

Jon

[This message has been edited by Jon Mewett (edited 08-05-2000).]

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