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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road 
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bleary eyed contentment greets the ghost of Gon in a land now absent that once was a tasty ice spiral see him trickle here and there falling chaotic he smiles to you waving a signalling wand to air white with wonder sleeping before the green day and was there once wisdom in the wind as we walked melancholy to the tower at the point seafoam christening our toes with tender kisses and i threw wishes in my dream that night and the sparrows knew in their other nest above my head where my heart was sleeping [This message has been edited by allan (edited 08-02-2000).] |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
How do you write these wonderful things, allan. This poem encompasses an eternity and a moment in one. It is such a delight to read your work ...  Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Allan~ This is just a very beautiful poem. Full of the intrigue of your mystique. 'and was there once wisdom in the wind' 'and i threw wishes in my dream that night' Just a softly uttered - WOW ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
That wuz a beautiful picture, allan! There's an air of melancholy about that I really like...Great piece!!! *S* love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
"seafoam christening our toes with tender kisses and i threw wishes in my dream that night and the sparrows knew in their other nest above my head where my heart was sleeping" what a dreamy little ditty this is  wonderful writing as always is your way dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
My goodness, a word smithy extraordinaire, methinks I will have to wander in this one several times to extract all that is in here. Lady Nogs |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
p.s. Warning: Any meaning herein is mostly subconscious!  [This message has been edited by allan (edited 08-03-2000).] |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
allan, "Wir wollen nicht Wert und Sinn, wir wollen Unwert und Unsinn" Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
allan- subconscious or not, i love this. this is a beautiful little poem. thanks for sharing it. -vicky "I have read your words, and within them I have found your heart. -vlraynes |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
quote: That is the beauty of this, we can all find what we need to find, based on our own thoughts and experiences. Lady Nogs [This message has been edited by Lady Noggins (edited 08-03-2000).] |
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