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Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
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Michigan, U.S.A.

0 posted 2000-08-02 03:12 PM


Spit tobacco, Jump!
Children chase you in the grass
Hop fast, don't get caught!

© Copyright 2000 Dennis L. White - All Rights Reserved
ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
1 posted 2000-08-02 06:50 PM


Dennis; You've got me stumped on this one!
I can't for the life of me think what spits tobacco and jumps. I love this haiku, but please fill me in on this mystical creature!
Love, Sis

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

Denise
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2 posted 2000-08-02 07:55 PM


Grasshoppers! This is delightful, Dennis! A rush of childhood memories came flooding back, remembering those days of chasing and catching those little critters and getting that 'tobacco' all over our hands! I love it!

Denise

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3 posted 2000-08-02 10:40 PM


Dennis~
Ewwwwww !
I remember too !
LOL !  
~*Marge~


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midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
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4 posted 2000-08-03 08:48 AM


This has gotta be my favourite, Dennis! Delightfully cute and cheeky!!!! Arrrrrrr I LOVE IT!!!! *S*

love, michelle


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