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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. 
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Fast your wings flutter Taste the flowers sweet nectar Hover, then you're gone! |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
hehe...this is a fun little haiku! It kind of reminds me of...well, uh, of me when I'm on a sugar high! (Which seems to be distressingly often...) My wings tend to buzz and carry me places when I'm like that, it's kind of a blessing and a curse...  But I think you're talking about hummingbirds here, a lot of which take up residence around my house! I have 4 feeders at compass points around my house, and I like to sit in the afternoon and watch them as they drink. They're really cool birds, aren't they? Great job in packing so much into a 5-7-5 format!  Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
A lovely little picture! Lady Nogs |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
You did it again, Bro! Wonderful picture you paint in this one, of those little feathered friends. I love humingbirds, but we don't have any around here. Sigh...Love, Sis Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dennis~ When nectar's all gone Oh, so quick to propeller Flitting hummingbird *Your Haiku's give me a jump-start ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Very playful, Dennis! *S* I feel great readin it! love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
happy little picture to start the morning...thanks for sharing your hummingbirds with us! dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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