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wordancer
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since 2000-07-30
Posts 809
VA

0 posted 2000-07-31 10:25 PM


...she dances to the
'beat' of a different drummer
that resonates in her mind;
trips down the street
tapping feet
clicking fingers,
inaudible song that sighs through
a bemused soul that searches;
quick mind goes uphill
betwixt between bewitch
wild thoughts tumble down
curious mind soars around
from clear skies that ring,
while startled strangers
start to cry
as they feel the sudden breeze
of free flight fantasies
brush by;
firefly dance
bright motes of dreams
dark night words that burn
swirl around an aching head
that tries to seek focus,
as she views the world thru
introspective glass lens
to look illogically
at what makes no sense
in a moment of time






[This message has been edited by Lady Noggins (edited 07-31-2000).]

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vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
1 posted 2000-08-01 01:43 AM



Hey, Lady Noggins-
  Got a dime?  
  This one is great!  Really love it.
  Keep posting and I'll keep reading.  

  -vicky

"I have read your words, and within
them I have found your heart.
  -vlraynes

midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
2 posted 2000-08-01 03:43 AM


Delightful, Lady Nogs! I love the way u convey the lightheartedness and jubilance!! Good one! *S*

love, michelle


If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

allan
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 620
On the road
3 posted 2000-08-01 03:11 PM


I very much liked the free flowing thought stream of this, flying hither and thither, catching quicksilver thoughts on the run. (Reminded me very much of my own rambles...!)


wordancer
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since 2000-07-30
Posts 809
VA
4 posted 2000-08-02 02:02 PM


Thanks folks, the wordancer is my other persona that I also write under at a different site, she does have a different way with words and more wild and free with her thoughts.  Actually this dual identity of mine gave me the freedom to try different ways and styles with my words.  Now, does this mean I have a split personality.    

Lady Nogs



[This message has been edited by Lady Noggins (edited 08-02-2000).]

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5 posted 2000-08-03 07:26 AM


LadyNog~
This is delightful.
I'd prefer to think of your persona
as diversified duality.
~*Marge*~




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JOY 14
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since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
6 posted 2000-08-03 01:10 PM


neat poem. sounds like me at times.  

Joy

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