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wordancer
Senior Member

since 2000-07-30

Posts 809
VA

0 posted 2000-07-31 06:05 AM

I am the angel that sits on your shoulder--
singing my life away to your silent soul.
You can only dream of my fading touch;
the dimming whisper in your ears; a
ghostly mote that dances before your eyes.
Do you wonder why--sometimes you cry?
...at the sudden flash of the cardinal wing,
hidden in the emerald green;
...at the faint caress of mellow breeze,
that comforts with slow, gentle ease.
Blue sky hangs deep--breathlessly still,
with the distant echoes of an aching
hunger, of not knowing what is lost.
Forlorn sigh of hidden despair;
fragments of ancient sorrows past,
that haunts your sleeping soul,
consolidates into crystallized
beauty of the drenching rain
that falls from your lonely face;
as you strain to catch the fading bow.
Do you wonder--why?

I am the angel that sits on your shoulder--
you are the anchor that keeps me on earth.
Please, do not wake as I slowly sing...
my fleeting, elusive dream.

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

1 posted 2000-07-31 06:32 AM

Wow i'm astounded...absolutely lovely!!!! Keep posting, Lady Nogs *S*

love, michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

wordancer
Senior Member

since 2000-07-30

Posts 809
VA

2 posted 2000-07-31 09:26 PM

I'm glad that you liked it. It was a particular joy to write and means a lot to me.

Lady Nogs

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2000-08-01 01:48 AM

Lady Nogs-
This is beautiful. I can see her
right there on my shoulder.

You are so talented.

"I am the angel that sits on your shoulder-
you are the anchor that keeps me on earth."

I love this!

-vicky

"I have read your words, and within them
I have found your heart.
-vlraynes

allan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 620
On the road

4 posted 2000-08-01 03:17 PM

Lovely. I felt this was very elegaic, and has a beautiful melancholic power...

'left breathless and intoxicated...

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

5 posted 2000-08-01 10:22 PM

Very beautiful poem, Lady Noggins! Welcome to Passions!

Denise

Little_Spyro
Senior Member

since 2000-01-09

Posts 659
San Diego, CA, USA

6 posted 2000-08-02 09:43 AM

W--wow...
This isn't just a great piece, this is stunning...well, WOW!!! Incredibly beautiful poem, Lady!!

And, yes, welcome to Passions!

Little Spyro T. Dragon

wordancer
Senior Member

since 2000-07-30

Posts 809
VA

7 posted 2000-08-02 01:55 PM

Everyones' kind comments are overwelming, thanks for such a warm welcome.

Lady Nogs

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