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vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
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Somewhere... out there...

0 posted 2000-07-31 12:51 PM



don't play the devil's game
   you cannot win
he plays with marked cards
   which only he can read
it's Satan's game
   he is the master
      he makes all the rules
the stakes are high
   winner take all
      heart
        soul
          life
don't be fooled
   by his evil tricks
      into thinking
          you might win
the only way
   to beat the devil
      is not to play
          the game


           -vlraynes


"...until you have read the
verse on his heart, you have
not truely met the poet.
           -vlraynes

© Copyright 2000 Vicky L. Raynes - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-07-31 03:16 AM


Vicky~
Oh, YEAH !
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Jon Mewett
Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

2 posted 2000-07-31 04:15 AM


Well yep I 'spose the last deals gone down.

Nice poem

Jon

midnightblues
Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
3 posted 2000-07-31 06:25 AM


vicky this is so SLY!!! hehhehheh thoroughly enjoyed!! *S*


love, michelle


If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

dgvarner
Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
4 posted 2000-07-31 10:53 AM


..devil went down to georgia, ya know...not while i was there tho..i was a good girl...

heehee

this is a great one tricks     love it, as usual..(we are our biggest fans, i'm sure, you and me!!  LOL)

dg


"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran


Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
5 posted 2000-07-31 04:53 PM


wow this is really good!!! i like it alot...
vlraynes
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
6 posted 2000-08-01 01:14 AM



Marge-  
Thanks for your enthusiasm!  
Glad you like it.    

Jon-
Thanks for reading and responding.
I appreciate your input.    

Michelle-
Thanks for the response.
Glad you enjoyed it.    

dg-
You, a good girl?  Come on,
tell the truth.    
Glad you like this one.  Me too.
  luv ya,  
    your biggest fan  (tricks)    

ERIN-
Thanks for your kind response.
So glad you like this.  

  Love you all,
      -vicky    

"...until you have read the verse
on his heart, you have not truely
met the poet.
            -vlraynes



[This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 08-01-2000).]

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