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Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2000-07-30 11:16 AM


MIST IN MY EYES

There’s mist in my eyes
A hovering haze
Of heavenly dew
That cover my days

My heart is unable
To work through the maze
Of sentiments putting
My mind in a daze

The mysteries of love
Will always amaze
The cleverest mind
In a number of ways

Just walk through the fog
And hope that it stays
This mystical mist
For the rest of your days

Elizabeth Santos  

© Copyright 2000 Elizabeth Santos - All Rights Reserved
vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
1 posted 2000-07-30 12:19 PM



Elizabeth-
  This is beautiful!  Really enjoyed
  reading it.  Love how you describe
  that 'mystical mist' that I'm so
  familiar with.  Thanks for
  sharing this one.  

  -vlraynes (vicky)

  "I have read your words, and within
   them I have found your heart.
                   -vlraynes



ellie LeJeune
Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
2 posted 2000-07-30 12:37 PM


Liz; Oh, how deliciously romantic! I love it.
An incurable romantic too, I see! Love, ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-07-30 10:18 PM


Beautiful thoughts, Elizabeth!  

Denise

midnightblues
Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
4 posted 2000-07-31 05:56 AM


Liz! This really called out my deep-within feelings! sigh...i'm all teary-eyed coz i'm feelin the joy and fear of fallin in love all at the same time...

My heart is unable
To work through the maze
Of sentiments putting
My mind in a daze


thanks for sharin this *S*


love, michelle


If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

Jon Mewett
Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

5 posted 2000-07-31 11:40 AM


Hazy crazy mystical mist..........long may it rule

Jon

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
6 posted 2004-12-25 11:46 AM



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