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midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
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0 posted 2000-07-30 09:03 AM


juz a sudden urge ... duno if its goot *S*
love, michelle  

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Someday, somehow
Love’ll become most profound
Not for silly lovers
But thinkers and cherishers

Someday, somehow
Love’ll come to be understood
That day, when its about
Heartless fools shall retire to historic woods

Someday, somehow
Love’ll see night and day
And worthy lovers
Shall be ever so gay

Someday, somehow
When that day comes
I’ll be the one
Who spreads the word around



If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

© Copyright 2000 MiCheLLe - All Rights Reserved
Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

1 posted 2000-07-30 05:10 PM


Hey MNB

Sometimes it sure gets lonely in this pub don't it.

Well I read your poem and I think It's Ok.

In fact I like it a lot,it's a pity others don't read it LOL  

Jon

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
2 posted 2000-07-30 05:22 PM



hi, michelle.
   i like this too.
  'someday, somehow',
   please, let me know
  'when that day comes'.
   That will be one
   truely wonderful day.  

  -vlraynes (vicky)

"I have read your words,
and within them I have
found your heart.
  -vlraynes

Denise
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3 posted 2000-07-30 10:27 PM


Lovely wishes, Michelle!

Denise

midnightblues
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4 posted 2000-07-31 12:16 PM


Jon -  u're so kind! LOL

Vicky, Denise......U're SO SWEET!!!! *huGz*

love, michelle


If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
5 posted 2000-07-31 12:24 PM


hey midnight..i'm with tricks--let me know too, when that day comes around!!  

good one, sorry i missed it before!  

dg


"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran


midnightblues
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6 posted 2000-07-31 06:12 AM


dg that's for sure! *huGz* thanks a load! *S*


love, michelle


If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

wordancer
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since 2000-07-30
Posts 809
VA
7 posted 2000-07-31 09:03 PM


This is very nice, I do like the way the thoughts are expressed...especially the hope that someday somehow

Lady Nogs

midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
8 posted 2000-08-01 03:15 AM


Thanks, beth...we all seem to be dreamers don we? *S*

love, michelle


If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2000-08-01 07:58 PM


MidnightBlues~
I guess you can call me a dreamer too !
I like dreaming, for like wishes ...
they often come true !

Wonderful thoughts.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


midnightblues
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Posts 1597
Singapore
10 posted 2000-08-02 06:43 AM


hi 5 marge! yeah...lets dream our way into the century of perfect love! *huGz*


love, michelle


If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

Little_Spyro
Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659
San Diego, CA, USA
11 posted 2000-08-02 09:36 AM


If I had written this, I wouldn't worry about it being good. Frankly, it's not good at all.

It's wonderful!!!!!! Incredible poem, Michelle!   Of course, I don't think you're capable of much else...

Little Spyro T. Dragon

midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
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12 posted 2000-08-03 08:26 AM


Spyro this is such a pleasant surprise! U're so sweet! Thanks a load, I really appreciate what u've said!


love, michelle


If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

allan
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 620
On the road
13 posted 2000-08-03 02:36 PM


Beautiful! 'Loved it.  
Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
14 posted 2000-08-03 02:41 PM


MnBlues,
  This is a wonderful poem, sounds like you're to spread the Good news! Good Read!
Dennis :^)


Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
15 posted 2000-08-03 05:14 PM


Someday, somehow
Love’ll come to be understood
That day, when its about
Heartless fools shall retire to historic woods


a lovely poem well written really liked this one.

"I am melancholy, flower cutting through stone"
manic street preachers

Majestic
Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 264
houston, tx.
16 posted 2000-08-04 12:13 PM


truly a poem from the heart....excellent read..thanx.

"To live is to love; To truly LOVE is to live!" ~kg~



midnightblues
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Posts 1597
Singapore
17 posted 2000-08-07 08:14 AM


Thanks!

allan, Dennis, brian and majestic..
glad u liked it! i'm touched by ur kind words!! *S*


love, michelle


If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

kelieth
Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314
Normal IL - USA
18 posted 2000-08-07 01:04 PM


I long to see that day for thee.  

Great writing.  

Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."

DawnG
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since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494
United States
19 posted 2000-08-07 08:09 PM


I agree with everyone else, it's a great poem..

                Dawn

chibi_dragon
Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 58

20 posted 2000-08-08 01:00 PM


Pretty much one of the better poems that I've commented on.
--Chibi

Darkened Treasures
Junior Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 18
nj
21 posted 2000-08-10 10:27 PM


Always I shall have the bleeding heart for such wonderful words of hope. Rise up your drink to to mine to toast the fullfillment of our shared dreams of LOVE!

Who would have thought a good little girl like you could destroy my beautiful wickedness.

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
22 posted 2000-08-10 10:39 PM


"Some day, some how"

Great poem, a really enjoyable read

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