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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road 
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come to the earth we burrow deep in the brown treasure we snake through jungles green and soft swim flashing rainbows in the translucent night fly as swallows bending the air smooth arrows being as babies gurgling under swimming suns soaring as souls each night a new story to unfurl lie stretched each nerve sighing in summer fields and in a balmy Indian night swoon in the mystic to rhythms sensual and hypnotic pure hymns to our blissful sleeping spirit catching orange flecks of burning clouds turning the world to dreams of scarlet curling like a puppy to sleep we smile and let go drifting slowly far from earth but happy to be lost in this magic [This message has been edited by allan (edited 07-30-2000).] |
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Euclid the Kid Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 51Eugene,Oregon |
Wow, Allan- this is deep! Too deep for me- but I find it awesome! Dean |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
allan..i agree with the kid--very deep! i'm not sure what your explanation on this one would be, but i think its rather awesome even without knowing its origin! great work! dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Allan~ When the spirit soars - it takes you with it. You've reached wonderful heights in this piece. A beautiful presentation to adorn your thoughts. I wish you much peace, my friend. ~Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
allan, what a beautiful, serene poem! Encore! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
"When the spirit soars - it takes you with it." Marge. Yes!  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Oh yes...I did enjoy this allan---beautiful, just beautiful...where you found the words, I'll never know...well, I'll HOPE to know... nice pen. |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Magnificent and magical, allan! *S* love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
*sigh* being one with the natural world as it was meant to be, a lovely wonderous vision. Lady Nogs |
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