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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road 
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i sit in the rain my face is all rainbow smiles i live and feel well walking a long road turning here and there to gaze hoping for some light the night can be long but always comes the dawn to brighten a heart travel on your road be true to feelings inside be gentle with you |
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Euclid the Kid Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 51Eugene,Oregon |
Now this I can relate to-being in touch with our world our feelings our life. I like it. Dean |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Allan~ May the road meet you Lined with good friends to greet you Warmed by morning sun May night hold you deep In the quilting of sweet sleep With dreams unfolding ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
allan, your poems are so wonderful. I'm still waiting to see one of the bad ones from the wardrobe hehe  Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
"...being in touch with our world our feelings our life." You got it Dean.  Wow, truly beautiful haikus Marge... Uta, hmm.. It's best they don't ever see the light of day I think! Thanks for your lovely remarks... [This message has been edited by allan (edited 07-30-2000).] |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Love becomes sweet like honey when flowing out from ur writing, allan! Beautiful haiku! *S* love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
ooooh..this i love!! heres my favorite part: "travel on your road be true to feelings inside be gentle with you" "be gentle with you".....thats such a great line.. dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Thanks Michelle and dg! And dg, I'm pretty sure Desiderata by Max Ehrmann was at the back of my mind when I wrote that particular line... Edit: In fact now that I re-read it it is almost a direct quote - 'Desiderata' reads 'Be gentle with yourself' (Whoops!) [This message has been edited by allan (edited 07-31-2000).] |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
allan..thanks for the extra read--enjoyed it almost as well as YOUR poetry (at the risk of sounding ignorant tho..what is desiderata??) dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Allan, May your path be joy May your journey be fruitful Knowing your true heart I like your STYLE! Dennis :^) < !signature--> Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) [This message has been edited by Dennis L. White (edited 08-01-2000).] |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
dg, not sure if you mean the word or the poem... desiderata the word: the plural of de•sid•er•a•tum which is something wanted or needed. (Same root as desire I suppose). Desiderata the poem: You'll find the explanation at the bottom of this page. Thanks again! Dennis: Wonderful wonderful haiku - thank you |
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