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Brenda Hall
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since 2000-05-30
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0 posted 2000-07-29 08:47 AM


There comes a time in our life
In good times or while in strife
Our 'checkered past' takes its'toll
And needing to search our soul!

The Question,needing asked today
What does our heart really say?
Do we weep,do we worry,or fret?
Was it our best or was it regret?

As our heart beats so very fast
We analyze our 'checkered past'
Remembering,we have come far,
Yet,we wonder,Where we are?

The Lord,weighs our every sin!
But don't worry my children
The Lord will surely guide thee,
Always and forever,through eternity!


GBU
Brenda Hall



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StarrGazer
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1 posted 2000-07-29 09:56 AM


This was great  Brenda  
Lost Dreamer
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2 posted 2000-07-29 10:21 AM


Brenda, Excellent poem, I really enjoyed.  
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3 posted 2000-07-29 11:42 AM


Brenda~
What a lovely ponder~

'Was it our best or was it regret?'
Enjoyed the read very much.
~*Marge*~


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midnightblues
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4 posted 2000-07-30 07:54 AM


I'm astounded, Brenda! This is so...philosophical!!! Gosh here's mi vote!*S*


love, michelle


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