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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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explore this cavern that is my soul can you feel the chill as you enter look into the darkness of the deepest passages what do you see nothing only memories memories of another time another place frozen as hard as stones headstones in a graveyard of hopes and dreams -vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
vlraynes, haunting and well crafted images. Really enjoyed this piece. "A frog, it cannot comprehend the sea Nor me happiness" Paul Draper-Mansun |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
great one tricks! love this..(you know how i love graveyards  ) very well written!! dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VLRaynes~ This is a lovely little treasure. Your signature is a poem unto itself - '"...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes' Magnificient ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Thanks, to all of you for your kind responses. It really means alot.  -vlraynes (vicky)  |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Woooo chilly and haunting.....yet there's a surreal and nostalgic air about it......very nice, vicky *S* love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Michelle- Thank you for your kind words. I'm glad you liked it. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I can relate to this. Very well written, Vicky! Denise |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Thank you so much, Denise. Your kind words are greatly appreciated. -vlraynes (vicky) "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 07-30-2000).] |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
quote: Well said, how we freeze our memories into time/place, never to be forgotten. Lady Nogs |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Lady Noggins- Thanks for reading and responding. I just replied to one of yours as well. Truely enjoyed it, and hope to hear lots more from you. -vlraynes (vicky) "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
Touching moveing piece it was enjoyable to read. Liked the poem. Good job. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Kevin- Thanks for the kind words. Glad you enjoyed it. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
A few weeks ago, I went with the Alchemist to go explore a nearby cave. It was dark, cold, and a little scary... Your words brought me right back to that moment! Thanks so much!  But when you are deep in the darkness, and you're sharing it with someone, you'd reflexively reach for someone, and when you've found them, hold them close. That's your light in the dark, the brightness in the dark depths of the cave. Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Little Spyro- Thanks so much for reading and responding. Glad this brought back memories for you. Thanks for the reminder that, if we just look hard enough, we can always find a 'light in the dark' to hang on to. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
understanding |
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