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vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...


0 posted 07-29-2000 01:24 AM       View Profile for vlraynes   Email vlraynes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit vlraynes's Home Page   View IP for vlraynes


vivid colors
   fragments
        of life
falling
    dying
piece
    by
       piece
death
    to old self
rebirth
    to the new
an end
    a new
        beginning


          -vlraynes


"...until you have read the verse
on his heart, you have not truely
met the poet."   -vlraynes
© Copyright 2000 Vicky L. Raynes - All Rights Reserved
dgvarner
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since 05-13-2000
Posts 3621
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1 posted 07-29-2000 01:26 AM       View Profile for dgvarner   Email dgvarner   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dgvarner

this is a great one tricks..love it!

would like to "rebirth" myself most days..how does one begin such a process...hmmm..



dg

"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran
vlraynes
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2 posted 07-29-2000 01:34 AM       View Profile for vlraynes   Email vlraynes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit vlraynes's Home Page   View IP for vlraynes


   dg-
     don't quite have it
     figured out yet - much
     easier written than done.  
     glad you like it though.  

              luv ya,
                   tricks

   -vlraynes
  
Lost Dreamer
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since 06-20-99
Posts 2589
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3 posted 07-29-2000 10:10 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

vlraynes, Wow, I like this, the form and the message are excellent together.  
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4 posted 07-29-2000 11:40 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

VLRaynes ~
This is a really neat piece.
~*Marge*~



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vlraynes
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Lost Dreamer & Marge-
Thank you both so much for your
input.  Your kind words warm my heart.  

-vlraynes (vicky)


"...until you have read the
verse on his heart, you have
not truely met the poet.
              -vlraynes
midnightblues
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since 07-01-2000
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6 posted 07-30-2000 11:43 PM       View Profile for midnightblues   Email midnightblues   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit midnightblues's Home Page   View IP for midnightblues

Simple and meaningful. Very nice, vicky! *S*

love, michelle


If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™
vlraynes
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Michelle-
  Thanks.  Glad you liked it.
  I love all your responses.  

  -vicky  

"...until you have read the verse
on his heart, you have not truely
met the poet.  
  -vlraynes
kelieth
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Best of luck with your new begining it is enjoyable to read.   Look forward to reading more of what you have in store.  

Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."
vlraynes
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Kevin-
  Thanks for reading and responding.
  Your kind words are truely appreciated.  

  -vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet.
  -vlraynes
passing shadows
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nice
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