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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States 
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Outdoor Mansion Summer's breeze on my arm, As I watch on the farm, City street just ahead, The city came with much dread, Gone are the days of seclusion, For me it means inclusion, Many fought this expansion, Because of it, the world's my mansion. |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
This is a really good poem Callie! How sad that the cities are taking over...it's hard to even hear yourself think anymore with all the noise! Keep posting!....beth You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
I find this a lovely piece I look forward to more of what you see.  Great Post and welcome to passions. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
welcome callie this is an interesting thought process..i like it! hope to see more from you! dg "i speak in written word--my lips, no sound may utter..." dgvarner |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Callie, Wonderful first post, I enjoyed, brings to my mind that word progress that seems to take over and steal what was once beauty. Welcome to Passions, please check your mail for a special message. |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Welcome, Callie!!!! I really enjoyed this piece...always envy those who can tell the forgotten stories of the past *S* love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Callie~ Sometimes the growth is not such a bad thing at all, is it ? I got the feeling that others may have objected, but you found the expansion appealing because it expanded your enjoyment in some way. Am I correct ? ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
I wanted to thank everyone for their replies. Marge, I do enjoy the expansion the city brings because with it brings sidewalks and subdivisions. Without the expansion I would have to stay on the 10 acre farm because I am disabled and dont drive. With the sidewalks I can be free to be me. Dawn |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Nicely written Callie.......Welcome. Jon |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
 Welcome to the Pub... Very well written and I'm looking forward to seeing more by you.. With a little piece of tomorrow, You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye. Because today won't last forever, And the past will only make you cry. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i like the way you express your new found independence in few words keep writing  |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
callie- i really like this...sorry i missed it until now. my 'welcome' may be latebut it's still sincere. look forward to reading lots more from you. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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Honey Bunch Member
since 2000-08-08
Posts 99South Africa |
Callie, From one "newbie" to another...a warm welcome! I've always slightly resented "progress" but can now understand that there is another side to it. Be well! Helen |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I like this Callie...I read more into it than what you profess...but that's because of the soul behind "these" eyes... very good! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
Mansions are everywhere. All we have to do is look around and realize how lucky we are...to have what we do. --Little Girl |
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