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Erin
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0 posted 2000-07-28 01:22 PM



~*~Someone~*~

There is someone I love
more then words could say.
He brightens up my day
in his own special way.
And I thank god
that he will never go away.

He is someone
that was sent from above.
To come and share
all our love.
As beautiful as a flower
but as precious as a dove.

A sweet little voice
that can be heard for miles.
He is someone
that can always make me smile.

**This poem I wrote for my nephew Anthony.



~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

© Copyright 2000 Erin Erbs - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2000-07-28 03:40 PM


This is so cute!  I am sure your nephew will appreciate this poem very much....beth

You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore

Ethan Halo
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2 posted 2000-07-28 04:26 PM


a great tribute. i hope he read this so he knows how special he is.

Everyone's got their demons.
We all got somethin' to atone for.

Erin
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~Chicago~
3 posted 2000-07-28 06:40 PM


well you guys thanks for the replies...i would let him read this but he cant...hes only 2 years old...but when he learns how to read im sure gonna give it to him...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

DawnG
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4 posted 2000-07-28 09:03 PM


Erin,

This is such a sweet poem. Reminded me of a few friends although you had written it for your nephew.

                 Dawn

dgvarner
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5 posted 2000-07-29 12:27 PM


very sweet...i have a 2 yr old myself..arent they great!     

dg


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brian madden
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6 posted 2000-07-29 08:36 AM


a lovely poem, very touching.

"A frog, it cannot comprehend the sea Nor me happiness" Paul Draper-Mansun

Lost Dreamer
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7 posted 2000-07-29 10:18 AM


Erin, Very precious poem you wrote as a special tribute to a precious child who obviously touches your heart. I love it, thanks for sharing it here with us.  
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8 posted 2000-07-29 11:17 AM


Erin~
Thank you for the sharing.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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midnightblues
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9 posted 2000-07-30 07:28 AM


This is so pretty, ERIN! What a wondrous feeling it must be to be able to love...u conveyed it real well! *S*


love, michelle


If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

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