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Dennis L. White
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0 posted 07-28-2000 08:53 AM       View Profile for Dennis L. White   Email Dennis L. White   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dennis L. White

Have you ever loved another,
Your heart within, it burned,
With passions sweet desires,
But that love was not returned?

Have you ever seen a sunset,
Too glorious for mortal eye,
Tried to capture with a camera,
But it's radiance, film denied?

Have you ever had a craving,
For something oh so sweet,
Only to be disappointed,
By an unsatisfying treat?

We oft seek things external,
To fill a voided part,
When we need to work internal,
To mend a broken heart.




[This message has been edited by Lost Dreamer (edited 07-31-2000).]
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Lady Lost
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1 posted 07-28-2000 08:56 AM       View Profile for Lady Lost   Email Lady Lost   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lady Lost

Nothing like a good cry on a Friday morning.  Did you write this one for me? LOL...I am dealing right now with my first broken heart, and this poem speaks so much truth about how I am feeling.  It is a great poem, Dennis..thank you.

You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore
Poet deVine
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2 posted 07-28-2000 10:34 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Ah! Truth masked as good poetry! A very good poem Dennis.  
DawnG
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3 posted 07-28-2000 02:42 PM       View Profile for DawnG   Email DawnG   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DawnG

Dennis,

This poem speaks volumes to me. I love it!

                              Dawn

ellie LeJeune
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since 01-10-2000
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4 posted 07-28-2000 05:29 PM       View Profile for ellie LeJeune   Email ellie LeJeune   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ellie LeJeune

Dennis: This is a beautiful poem, Bro. The wisdom is perfect. We do need to look inside for the healing to begin and our needs to be met. "for the Kingdom of God is within you".
This is one of your very best. Love, Sis

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL
vlraynes
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since 07-25-2000
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5 posted 07-29-2000 12:48 AM       View Profile for vlraynes   Email vlraynes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit vlraynes's Home Page   View IP for vlraynes

   Dennis-
     All I can say is, "Wow!".  So sad, and
     so true.  Brings back some, not so
     distant, memories.  This one touched
     my heart.  Thank you for that.  

     -vlraynes (vicky)

     "I have read your words, and within
      them I have found your heart."
                      -vlraynes


dgvarner
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since 05-13-2000
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6 posted 07-29-2000 01:09 AM       View Profile for dgvarner   Email dgvarner   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dgvarner

oooh...that hit home...

"We oft seek things external,
To fill a voided part,
When we need to work internal,
To mend a broken heart."

this one says a lot dennis...i like it much..and i think at some point in our lives all of us can identify..!  

as usual, great writing     

dg


"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran
Lost Dreamer
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7 posted 07-29-2000 10:05 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Wow Dennis, This poem is fabulous, quite the message you send out through it.  
Marge Tindal
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8 posted 07-29-2000 01:16 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Dennis~

'Have you ever seen a sunset,
Too glorius for mortal eye,
Tried to capture with a camera,
But it's radiance, film denied?'

I have !
I tucked it away with the Polaroid's in my mind.
~*Marge*~


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midnightblues
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9 posted 07-30-2000 08:33 AM       View Profile for midnightblues   Email midnightblues   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit midnightblues's Home Page   View IP for midnightblues

Yes, i have..Dennis *winkZ*
You've opened up mi third eye with this
*S*

love, michelle


If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™
deleeme
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10 posted 07-30-2000 08:49 AM       View Profile for deleeme   Email deleeme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit deleeme's Home Page   View IP for deleeme

Dear Brother,
  I think we've all been ther--done that in one way or another--and I say that not to minimize your point but to show we all need application of it. So often we settle for unfulfilling substitues & fillers in our life when, if we go about it right we could have the real thing.  Great Poem-you've got my vote!    David
Denise
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11 posted 07-30-2000 10:33 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Wise words, Dennis!

Denise
Jon Mewett
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12 posted 07-31-2000 11:36 AM       View Profile for Jon Mewett   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jon Mewett

The verse that DGV has highlighted I agree is something special Dennis.

Nice One

Jon
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so true!
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