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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... 
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under glass the flower that sat next once fresh and beauty full now withers, petals falling. the water, once life now brown and aged separated by glass, time. voice that yesterday once upon squandered youth whispering, now silent. the breath, once life now calm and still separated by glass, time. eternity kissed, embraced like petals pressed in youth faded photograph, sharp. the memory, life once now bequeaths solace separated by glass, time. 7/00 bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Just keep delivering great poetry, Daniel, upbeat of not! Wonderful writing, as always! Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Daniel~ I so enjoy your thoughts - they run the spectrum of emotions. Your versatility takes me on many rides. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Daniel, this is so nostalgic.....reminds mi of time passed by.....vote! love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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