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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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watch closely and assume nothing. you live in a maze a labyrinth of time. stumbling through invisible walls running into your own reflection. who do you see there-- is that you? a distorted picture of what you thought you knew. who is your friend-- is that him? a distorted picture of what you thought was true... how will you handle your mind-- in a labyrinth of time watch closely, and assume nothing. -dgvarner "i speak in written word--my lips, no sound may utter..." dgvarner |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
DgVarner, I get an eerie feeling reading this(looking over my shoulder, did something just brush past or was it an illusion).The cautionary words, Watch Closley, Assume nothing are chilling! Very mysterious piece! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Hi, you! Gotta luv this one.  Love ya, Tricks  vlraynes |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I have to agree with Dennis, a very haunting piece. really enjoyed reading this "A frog, it cannot comprehend the sea Nor me happiness" Paul Draper-Mansun |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
dgvarner, Wow, the intensity of this poem, has me hoping my eyes are open in all I do. Most excellent writing in this one. |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Sounds like ageing with time to me, dgvarner...abit haunting and eerie.....but its wonder how u managed to bring out that kinda feeling! *S* love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
dennis: i hadnt intended it to be so "eerie"..but i guess it is a bit aye! tricks: thanks for reading this one...again! lol brian: so glad you enjoyed this..thanks for reading!! lost dreamer: thanks for your response! keep your eyes open  (that way you wont run into things! lol)midnight: i hadnt thought about the aging with time thing..but reading it thru again, i can see where you read that..very interesting...thanks for your twist on it! thanks all, for stopping by and leaving your thoughts with me dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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