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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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he wasnt on the other side of town he was on the other side of life... thats what i've been trying to tell you! he didnt just go for a walk out there he went to punch his time-card. i could see it in his eyes-- the gloom behind the smiles. the jokes to cover the pain, the laughter to hide the shame... he told me once, he didnt choose to check-in-- when he checked out, he kept the key... -dgvarner "i speak in written word--my lips, no sound may utter..." dgvarner |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very sad.  Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DGVarner~ This one grabbed my attention in a heartbeat. What an interesting take ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
This is so gloomy and tragic.....yet it still tugs at my heart, dgvarner..... love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
You touch the sad side of my heart, but in a lovely way--I feel the pain, and dissapointment here. Good poem! David |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
hey guys! thanks SO MUCH for your replies!!  i know its sad, but i live to be here..! i wish i had more time to make my own replies to all of YOUR poety!! dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- sorry it took me so long to reply to this one. I've read it several times now, and I really like it. felt it a little too much I think. didn't quite know what to say. still don't.  -vlraynes (tricks) "I have read your words, and within them I have found your heart. -vlraynes |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
Such a sad sweet piece will linger in the memories of me. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
tricks: thanks for your reply even if you didnt know what to say kevin: i appreciate your reply..i hope this doesnt linger in the wrong place of your mind..it could make for a sad, sad day..! thanks for reading dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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