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kelieth
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since 2000-06-12
Posts 314
Normal IL - USA

0 posted 2000-07-27 01:56 AM



A post here long past due,
Lost Love seeks a love true,
I hope this piece brings to you,
The burning love to guide you through.

____________________________________________________

The beating of hearts,
The flame within,
Brings true love,
That never ends.

An eternal dance,
Gracefully smooth.
Let your heart,
Sing to you.

Hear the voiceless,
Sweet melodies,
Sung for all,
The world to see.

Feel the heat,
From the flame,
No cold can touch,
This heart built blaze.

For ages past,
It's been alive.
Embrace the love,
Do not hide.

The strength to gain,
Out weighs the cost.
Give your all,
Else it's lost.

Feel the passion,
Burn within.
Join the souls,
Whom long to live.

Look in every,
Unusual spot,
Find the spark,
That burns to hot.

True love is found,
In such a way.
Yet hard to find,
Make no mistake.

True love is,
A gracious thing.
Follow your heart,
And let it Sing.


Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."

© Copyright 2000 Kevin A. Lormand - All Rights Reserved
vlraynes
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
1 posted 2000-07-27 02:05 AM


Kevin-
This one is great, and so true.
True love is so very hard to find, but this gives one hope that it does exist.  Thanks!  

-vlraynes

I have read your words, and within them I have found your heart.   -vlraynes

Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow
2 posted 2000-07-27 02:48 AM


Kevin, Wow, this is fabulous, what a way you have with words to express how you feel.  
Lady Lost
Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470

3 posted 2000-07-27 07:53 AM


W O W     Kevin, this is AWESOME!!  It seems as though you have taken a journey into my mind and discovered my thoughts exactly!  I could not have written my feelings about true love better...you are certainly talented!  And thank you for taking the time to write this piece .... what can I say?  Beautiful....       

You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore

childomine
Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL
4 posted 2000-07-27 08:54 AM


Excellent poem Kevin!!  You've done a beautiful job with this one.

"Love is something you can leave behind when you die. It's that powerful." -- John (Fire) Lame Deer



Dennis L. White
Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
5 posted 2000-07-27 11:16 AM


Kevin,
  So eloquently you have written about a thing most desired. So sweet and tender are the words you write, loves' song echos in your words. This is a beautiful piece!
Dennis :^)


Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

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6 posted 2000-07-29 12:40 PM


Kelieth~
This is simply beautiful.
Thanks so much for the sharing.

'Feel the heat,
From the flame,
No cold can touch,
This heart built blaze.'
~*Marge*~


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midnightblues
Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
7 posted 2000-07-30 08:29 AM


Simple and sweet, kevin...point taken...love's supposed to be sweet i guess *S*


love, michelle


If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

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