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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand 
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You Weren’t You Only a spark, A tiny forgotten memory, Wriggling to be noticed, Begging to be remembered. The pain it caused, The guilt you felt, Floods back as you remember, A time when it was true, A time when you weren’t you. Lynne "He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
Hehehe, Lynne, I know this one too, this is actually not too bad. Quite short, but hey I like it! Though I still think 'Sacred Serenity's the best one you wrote - James The beauty of nature is displayed, not through itself, but through the creatures dwelling within its bosom. |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
The memories of things we wish we hadn't done. Great piece.  Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Lynne, I think you captured a point in time everyone experiences at least once, nice job. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
ditto with the rest..i must say this feeling of self reproach comes to me quite often |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
or perhaps Yu weren't Yu? amazing how a drip can become a flood, eh? progression and transformation yet perhaps wistfull nostalga? love it, Lynne! bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I can relate to this, too! Well written, Lynne! Denise |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Thanx James.. ^_^ Yeah, I like that one better too.. not sure if it is my best tho.. Kelieth, L.D and kaile.. yeah, not such a nice feeling, hehe.. thank you! ^_^ glad u like it.. Daniel.. no, hehe.. Yu was not Yu.. *_^ thanx bleeding.. hehe.. knew you wouldn't miss this one.. =P Thank you Denise, for your lovely comments.. ^^ Luv, all.. Lynne "He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Glad I went digging about, Yu Lan, I would not have wanted to miss this one...I could relate to this, as I seem to do a lot of this...thanks for the voice here. |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
I'm at a loss of words, Lynne. This is so...real and......wow its magical how u bring out that emotion in this piece! *salute* *S* love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
thank you very much serenity, and midnightblues.. ^_^ Youa re so kind!! *_^ Luv ya, Lynne "He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu |
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