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Munda
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0 posted 2000-07-26 03:34 PM



The kids sounds asleep
The evening still young
The radio plays
My favourite song
My feet up the couch
At hand a good book
A cat on my lap
Ah, life is just good !

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Lady Lost
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1 posted 2000-07-26 03:39 PM


I know that feeling...as you say "aaaaaahhhh" while you're plopping down on the couch after a long day!  Cute!

You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore

kelieth
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2 posted 2000-07-27 01:35 AM


The romantic peaceful time of day yet found.   Great job.  Want to settle back and read a book my self.  

Kevin

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Lost Dreamer
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3 posted 2000-07-27 02:44 AM


Munda, How delightfully calm and relaxing this poem is. You created a wonderful image with so few words, marvelous.  
kaile
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4 posted 2000-07-27 04:12 AM


and gosh, i should be hitting the books instead of facing the computer..lucky you for enjoying your evening
Jon Mewett
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5 posted 2000-07-27 04:43 AM


Lilting and hopeful Munda......just what you need sometimes..great.

Jon

Dennis L. White
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6 posted 2000-07-27 11:20 AM


Munda,
  Ah, the simple pleasures can oft times be most rewarding! Nice poem!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

Denise
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7 posted 2000-07-27 08:54 PM


Life doesn't get much better than that!  

Denise

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8 posted 2000-07-29 12:35 PM


Munda~
Ahhhhhh !
Put a puppy on that lap and you've
just shared my couch !

A lovely and calming delight.
~*Marge*~


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brian madden
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ireland
9 posted 2000-07-29 04:56 PM


well titled wonderful poem.

"A frog, it cannot comprehend the sea Nor me happiness" Paul Draper-Mansun

allan
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10 posted 2000-07-29 05:45 PM


Yes. Exactly. Life can feel so sweet at times like these.  

Elizabeth Santos
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11 posted 2000-07-29 07:07 PM


You well describe those few sweet moments
Liz

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12 posted 2000-07-30 11:37 PM


So delightful, Munda! *S*

love, michelle


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