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zarre
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Hull Uni / Tring, England


0 posted 07-26-2000 10:59 AM       View Profile for zarre   Email zarre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for zarre


Colours ripple and merge into a blur
Images vanish in the forming light
And, awakening, I lose sight of her  
A lady fading with the end of night.
Fragments reflect our dance and embrace
Shaped by emotions amazingly strong.
I try in vain to recall her face
Sure only that her hair was flowing long.
Her sorrow salved with warmth in love-linked hearts
We stood together alone, music played...
I rise now, and the falling dream departs
Though, unnoticed, some memories have stayed.

One day, those distant echoes may be why
I turn, to take the road less travelled by.


Hi all! Just thought I'd dip my foot in for the first time with this sonnet...

© Copyright 2000 zarre - All Rights Reserved
Lady Lost
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1 posted 07-26-2000 01:04 PM       View Profile for Lady Lost   Email Lady Lost   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lady Lost

What a wonderful poem...your dream is breath taking and beautiful..I thnk you should dip your feet more often!!

You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore
Poet deVine
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2 posted 07-26-2000 01:18 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to the family! This is absolutely lovely! I look forward to reading more from you. Please check your email!  
Munda
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3 posted 07-26-2000 04:07 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Wonderful first post. I enjoyed it much !
Welcome to Passions  
allan
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On the road


4 posted 07-26-2000 04:26 PM       View Profile for allan   Email allan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit allan's Home Page   View IP for allan

A very lovely first poem. Its elegance lingers in the mind. I liked this very much.  
kelieth
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5 posted 07-27-2000 01:39 AM       View Profile for kelieth   Email kelieth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit kelieth's Home Page   View IP for kelieth

Great first post Memories help us live great job.  

Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."
vlraynes
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since 07-25-2000
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Somewhere... out there...


6 posted 07-27-2000 02:12 AM       View Profile for vlraynes   Email vlraynes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit vlraynes's Home Page   View IP for vlraynes


I like this.  Welcome to Passions!  Dip those poetic feet in anytime.  


vlraynes
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7 posted 07-27-2000 03:01 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Wonderful poem, I enjoyed, welcome to Passions, hope you stay here is enjoyable.  
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8 posted 07-27-2000 04:03 AM       View Profile for kaile   Email kaile   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kaile

welcome to passions...i enjoyed this muchly...dig those rhymes and may you feel free to plant your foot for long here
zarre
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since 07-26-2000
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Hull Uni / Tring, England


9 posted 07-27-2000 11:07 AM       View Profile for zarre   Email zarre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for zarre

Wow! Thanks for all those kind comments. I certainly look forward to spending more time here (in between writing a 20000 word thesis this summer). This certainly seems like a friendly place to be      
Denise
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10 posted 07-27-2000 08:48 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Welcome to Passions, Zarre! I enjoyed this!

Denise
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11 posted 07-29-2000 11:51 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Zarre~
A most enjoyable read.
Welcome to the family of Passionate Poets.
The BEST gosh-darned poetry site on the web.
You will enjoy your stay.
~*Marge*~


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midnightblues
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12 posted 07-30-2000 08:02 AM       View Profile for midnightblues   Email midnightblues   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit midnightblues's Home Page   View IP for midnightblues

Welcome, zarre!!! This is soooooo melodious!!! i love it !! *S*


love, michelle


If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™
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excellent
 
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