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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. 
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Fragile wings in flight Devoid of strength and might Dignified flutter Silent beauty floats Amidst the blooming flowers Tranquil summer dance [This message has been edited by Dennis L. White (edited 07-27-2000).] |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
The beautiful serene dance of a butterfly...so free and light! I love this one, Dennis! You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore |
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zarre New Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 5Hull Uni / Tring, England |
That last line is wonderful. Mind you, the butterflies I saw this morning seemed more playful than dignified! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
These are lovely! I could almost picture the butterfly.  |
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Euclid the Kid Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 51Eugene,Oregon |
this is nice but I don't get it--could you explain(by e-mail if you like) the Kid |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Dennis I do envy you for your haiku's. A form I shall never master so well ! Excellent my friend. |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Lovely. I especially liked the second one, very beautiful... |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
dennis: How incredibly you have captured the essence of summers delighful butterflies! The master of Haiku has outdone himself once again! Pure perfection! Love, Sis< !signature--> Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL [This message has been edited by ellie LeJeune (edited 07-26-2000).] |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Aah, Dennis, there u go again, painting beautiful pictures with your haiku.. loved this!!  Luv, Lynne "He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Beautiful little flutter Dennis, simplicity at its finest. Bonnie |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
ahh..haiku king....you do this so well!  love these about such a fragile, beautiful creature...youve captured it well!! dg "i speak in written word--my lips, no sound may utter..." dgvarner |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
and another lovely haiku to make my day gosh Dennis...I have been having a severe withdrawal illness from your delightful haikus...do post more often,okie |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Dennis- I love these! They're really beautiful. More please.  vlraynes |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Bro; I'm back because I forgot to put this delicious gem in my library! Sis Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow Dennis, what beautiful images you paint in both haikus, so whimsical and carefree. As always, I love your haikus Take care, Melissa honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dennis~ Such lovely thoughts flutter about within the grace of your Haiku. You have a tremendous talent for this form. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Oooh Dennis, what a beautiful array!!! *S* love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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