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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand 
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The Wind And I A whisper in my ear, A breath against my cheek, I feel the wind, Hold out my hand. Hand in hand, we walk; The wind and I, Listening to the warbles, Of the magpies in the trees. Lynne "He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Lynne, The wind can make one feel very at home with nature, I like this.  |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
What a delightful conveyance bout the beauty of the wind, Lynne! Thanks for sharing this! Short and sweet *S* love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
I live in Florida and normally the only wind we get is before a storm. But when I do feel the caress of the wind I always give thanks. There's nothing in the world like it to me. |
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zarre New Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 5Hull Uni / Tring, England |
'Hand in hand we walk The wind and I;' This is a wondeful poem, with an eastern feel to it. |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Lynne, This is a beautiful representation of wind, and ones relationship to it and the nature around us. Surreal and serene! Dennis :^) < !signature--> Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) [This message has been edited by Dennis L. White (edited 07-26-2000).] |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
What a delightful poem Lynne ! |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Superb!  |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Thank you all.. Lost Dreamer, Michelle, childomine, zarre, Dennis, Munda and allan.. ^_^ much appreciated replies.. =P Luv, Lynne "He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
very nice Yu! tis nice when one has an allie, eh? Very special when on can feel that the elements are one's friends... even more so when one's friends enhance and gift... well done, Lynne bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
The wind is lucky to have a companion as you. Great job. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Yu Lan,it seems that i am reading a different kndof writing style from you...are you trying to expressin more in less words?if so,then i must say you have done very well here |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
YuLan~ How delightfully done. Such serenity is a pleasurable read. 'Hand in hand, we walk; The wind and I, Listening to the warbles, Of the magpies in the trees' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Thank u bleeding, kelieth, kaile, Marge.. Mmm, I am not exactly trying out a new style of writing, no.. I wrote this a wee while ago, and it sounded finished, but was so short I felt it didn't express anything.. but I read it again, and decided I liked it just how it was.. hehe.. thank you all for such kind replies!!  Luv, Lynne "He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu |
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