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kelieth
Member

since 2000-06-12

Posts 314
Normal IL - USA

0 posted 2000-07-26 01:52 AM

Today a lady asked of me
To write a piece for her to see.
Here it is a post for her.
A poem to Lost Dreamer.
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On pillows of grass,
Just lay back,
Look at the sky,
And just relax.

Watch the clouds,
Billow by,
And look for shapes,
You can find.

Do not fret,
Life's harsh quests,
Give a sigh,
And calmly rest.

Enjoy the quiet,
Of the sky,
On pillows of grass,
Watch clouds roll by.

If you like,
Softly doze,
And let your dreams,
Boldly go.

Let them take you,
Where they will,
Let peace and grace,
Surround you still.

Enjoy the soft,
Touch of green,
As you sweetly,
Have your dreams.

Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

1 posted 2000-07-26 02:16 AM

Kevin-
I love this.
It's so happy and peaceful.

vlraynes

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

2 posted 2000-07-26 02:41 AM

This is so dreamy, kevin! How I wish I was in the setting! Even feels great just reading this! Wooo great piece, buddy!! *S*

love, michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

Lost Dreamer
Member Elite

since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

3 posted 2000-07-26 02:43 AM

Kevin, Wow, this is excellent, I truly love the peaceful feeling I got from this poem. Thank you very much.

Dennis L. White
Senior Member

since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

4 posted 2000-07-26 06:47 AM

Kevin,
What a peaceful, serene setting you have painted here, you write so well!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

childomine
Senior Member

since 2000-01-25

Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL

5 posted 2000-07-26 06:52 AM

Kevin - your words leave one feeling peaceful and yearning for more (of that peace). I can remember as a child laying in the grass and looking at the shapes of the clouds. I'm going to do that today. Thanks.

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

6 posted 2000-07-26 08:06 AM

WOW! how wonderfully serene this is!
Beautiful! ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

Lady Lost
Member

since 2000-07-13

Posts 470

7 posted 2000-07-26 08:12 AM

I love this! Write me one!! Write me one!!! I love how beautiful your words flow....

You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore

Jon Mewett
Senior Member

since 2000-03-04

Posts 1304

8 posted 2000-07-26 08:59 AM

When I was a boy I used to lie on top of big haystacks and count the clouds or the birds.

I suppose they were big pillows of grass,this took me back.......nice

jon

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

9 posted 2000-07-26 03:50 PM

Wow, wonderful poem Kevin. Now if this isn't the perfect tranquillizer to fall asleep on I will send her to Doc !

Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

10 posted 2000-07-26 05:53 PM

hehe, lovely kaile..

Lynne

"He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

11 posted 2000-07-26 11:54 PM

ahhhh...this is wonderful....and peaceful...and ..dreamy-like....and....i need to go find me a big grassy spot!.....

great one kevin!

dg

"i speak in written word--my lips, no sound may utter..." dgvarner

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