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Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
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0 posted 2000-07-25 08:09 PM


It was in youth when I first cast
My eyes upon life’s tinselled road
Those were the days I thought would last
My shoulders strong could bear the load
I didn’t think of vain tomorrow
And now I am the child of sorrow

The transient vision soon was fled
And now life’s toils take their toll
The happiness in blood was bled
And sad remorse corrupts my soul
I didn’t think of vain tomorrow
And now I am the child of sorrow

The lessons taught they pain my mind
All joy removed from this sad life
In storm clouds black there is no kind
In swirling winds the sleet is rife
I didn’t think of vain tomorrow
And now I am the child of sorrow

The tempest roars around my head
And foreboding comes into my room
Death beside creeps in bed
The cold surrounds me like a tomb
I didn’t think of vain tomorrow
And now I am a child of sorrow

But hope now stands in beacon bright
And blinds my eyes with visions bold
And on this steed I now alight
Dashing sadness ….shunning cold
For when you live in your tomorrow
There is no room for a child of sorrow

JOn Mewett



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Denise
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1 posted 2000-07-25 08:22 PM


Well done, Jon! I love the hopeful ending, too!

Denise

midnightblues
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Posts 1597
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2 posted 2000-07-26 02:15 AM


Hi Jon! This is astounding! The journey into being a stronger person? not sure whether i misinterpreted.....but very much enjoyed! Thanks for sharing! *S*


love, michelle


If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

childomine
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since 2000-01-25
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3 posted 2000-07-26 07:18 AM


Hanging onto regrets of the past can bring much sorrow in the present and future. Very good Jon.
StarrGazer
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since 2000-03-05
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Texas
4 posted 2000-07-26 07:25 AM


I loved this! Very well written  
Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
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5 posted 2000-07-26 08:54 AM


Thanx.....the writing of this acted as a sought of therapy for me, helped to dispell a sought of sadness.

thanx for reading

jon

Lady Lost
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since 2000-07-13
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6 posted 2000-07-26 09:13 AM


There are some poems that are written really well and some that you can relate to well...this is both.  I really felt you in this one, Jon...tears in my eyes as I type.  This really is a great poem.

You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore

Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

7 posted 2000-07-28 08:58 AM


Thanx LL ......Thanx for comments

Jon

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