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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470
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This is part II of "The Man who Lives in My Dreams"...Sorry, Mom, I know you really liked him..so did I. "And you Learn and You Learn with every Goodbye, you Learn." (author unknown) Now that you are gone I thought that you should know; that I never wanted you to leave, I didn’t want to see you go. I know that when you left and walked out my front door; you thought I thought of everything, but I have a few things more. Every part inside me every part that makes me whole; will miss you very much, more than you could know. My hands will miss your skin so smooth and soft to feel; My lips will miss your lips, and those kisses I had to steal. My nose will miss the scent of the cologne I know so well; nuzzling in your neck, lost in the pleasant smell. My ears will miss the sound of your deep sexy voice; and the spell it would cast on me, at times not giving me a choice... My feet will really miss not being on the ground; for you lifted me up high, and never let me down. My arms will miss holding you so close and so tight; My sleep will miss being deprived, from your snoring all through the night. My stomach will miss aching from laughing constantly; at your quirky jokes, even the ones aimed at me. The car has run out of fuel the journey finally ends; we walk our separate ways, I can only dream we’ll meet again... I’ll miss you, baby. < !signature--> You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore [This message has been edited by Lady Lost (edited 07-25-2000).] |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
You have captured so well the essence of this goodbye Beth. Written beautifully, and so very touching. Bonnie |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
Touching piece every bit as enjoyable as the first. The little things allways mean so much and linger in the memories for you to touch. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Lost Lady, Well written remorse for a love lost! You write so well! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
I enjoyed this as much as the previous piece, Lady Lost! ...... err I know this is supposed to be a sad piece, but it was still conveyed beautifully and I'm sure many ppl can actually relate to this! God Bless your heart-ache dear..... love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
aah, Beth, I'm so sorry, but I trust that you know what's best. You wrote this poem beautifully from your heart. Time will heal. Love, Mom Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wonderful writing, Lady Lost. Love isn't always easy. I wish you a brighter tomorrow. Denise |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
Thank you for all your response...it really means a lot to me. The words to this were taken from my heart to my notepad in about ten minutes...this really came from inside me. Why is letting go the hardest part? You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
A great way to deal with an obviously huge loss. You never know fate may play her hand.... Jon |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyLost~ This is really a lovely piece of your heart. As far as 'letting go' ... if someone meant something in your life ... then it should be difficult to let go. Maintain the memories and perhaps the next train of thought you two meet on will be really good for you both. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
ah...from one Lady to another, well done. The pain of a loss so eloquently expressed. Lady Nogs |
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