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midnightblues
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0 posted 2000-07-25 03:57 AM


This was inspired by the song 'Never Ever' by All Saints......hope u guys'll like it~

love, michelle

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never ever have I felt this blue
your love for me used to be so true
what's gone wrong with you
now you're actually being cruel

never ever have I felt this bad
you've sent my mind spinning in depress
demolishing the little confidence I had
banishing my care into lonesome distress

never ever have I felt this sad
I've had enough, I really had
a slap on a face
a stab of pain
and a stinging torrent of rain

never ever have I felt this strong
you shall be sorry you've ever done wrong
no more nights of crying in vain
no more days of pining in pain
take that one step
outta that door

never ever will you hurt me no more  


If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

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kaile
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1 posted 2000-07-25 04:48 AM


i enjoyed the gradual progression from the depression to recovery of the speaker here
very nice

midnightblues
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2 posted 2000-07-25 05:10 AM


Aw kaile, you're so sweet! *S* Thanks!

love, michelle


If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

Lady Lost
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since 2000-07-13
Posts 470

3 posted 2000-07-25 07:51 AM


I love that song!  I was singing your poem to the beat of that song while I was reading it...so cool!  Great post!

You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore

kelieth
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since 2000-06-12
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4 posted 2000-07-25 11:38 AM


That's a tough journey to make and I agree I like the journey and it has a happy ending.  Great Job.  

Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."

midnightblues
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5 posted 2000-07-25 11:52 AM


Lady Lost - Yup tat song got me thru my break-up with my first boyfriend.....sigh......heh *huGz*

kevin - Thanks! Lets all be so tough! *S*


love, michelle


If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

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