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Sven
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0 posted 2000-07-25 12:48 PM


listen. . .
what do you hear?

hearts beating
souls meeting

hands folding
arms holding

joining minds
love finds

love sounds
passion found

the sound of you
the sound of me

the sound of us. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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kelieth
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1 posted 2000-07-25 01:56 AM


Beautiful simplicity.  Very enjoyable.

Kevin

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midnightblues
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2 posted 2000-07-25 04:23 AM


I agree with kevin!!

love, michelle


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kaile
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3 posted 2000-07-25 04:41 AM


short and soooo sweet
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4 posted 2000-07-25 02:49 PM


like a passionate postcard my friend...a beautiful description of a moment in time.
brian madden
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5 posted 2000-07-25 05:33 PM


Sigh Sven, you could melt candles jusy by whispering this poem.

"A frog, it cannot comprehend the sea Nor me happiness" Paul Draper-Mansun

Denise
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6 posted 2000-07-25 08:31 PM


Very beautiful, Sven!

Denise

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7 posted 2000-07-25 09:02 PM


I like this.  
Sven
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8 posted 2000-07-26 01:03 AM


Thank you all my friends. . .

Your replies are very welcome. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2000-07-26 01:30 AM


Oh, Sven~
How very lovely - from the title
to the lovely melody found within your heart.
~*Marge*~


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StarrGazer
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10 posted 2000-07-26 07:36 AM


Sven, lovely and romantic as always *sighs*
Sven
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11 posted 2000-07-27 12:28 PM


Marge, thank you as always my friend. . . glad that you really liked. . .  

Starr, thank you. . .glad to see you again!!  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Marina
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12 posted 2000-07-28 10:08 PM


Thought you could get it passed me did ya!!!!!  Well I found it !!  

I am glad I did.  This is very soft and tender Sven.  Another beauty from you.

Now don't ever hide it again!!!!!  LOL  

Marina


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vlraynes
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13 posted 2000-07-29 12:31 PM


    Sven-
      Love this!  Simple and beautiful.  


vlraynes

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