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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
Summer time marks a place you see. The fresh green grass, 'neath large oak trees. The playful sight, of birds in flight, call to you before the night. The sun's loving, tender touch. Brings life and love, to grass and us. The cool chill, rolls down the hills, open our hearts fo us to feel. Withering up with, the falling leaves. Summer passes, to fast it seems. The nights turn cold, be I so bold, I long for someone here to hold. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Kevin, I'm seeing seasons here but they are either out of sequence or are intentionally mixed. May your Spring and Summer be full of the joy you seek! Nice Work! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
Beautiful poem...I love the summer, I am a whole different person when it is hot out...when winter comes, I hibernate like a bear! Great poem! You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
The gifts of nature are simply divine, and they've come alive in your poem, kevin!! What a delightful piece!!! love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This was such a wonderful piece!!!! Enjoyed it!! It did have just a touch of sadness at the end though!!! Nice!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Kevin, It's good to hear from you again. I've missed your poetry. As you know, Summer is my favorite season as well. I sure hate to see it come to an end, with so much left for me to do. Dawn |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Kevin, I love the imagery in this poem, and agree summer passes much to quickly. |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
You have a wonderful way of writing about nature Kevin. So easy not to notice what is around us daily but you remind us of the joy - if we just take the time to look. |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
Very good poem, I however canot wait for fall , my favorite season !!! |
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