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dr tung
Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 55
singapore

0 posted 2000-07-23 10:44 AM


too simple
my life goes each day
lost it
the thrill fun and play

each day
i know not what expectation
live it
without any consideration

i long
for spice and exicitment
to feel
love, sense of commitment

i wait
patience can last no longer
one second
seems like it's forever

all planned
how to tell my love
the one
my affections i serve

i sleep
can only think of her
i wake
wish she was near

the time
i love u to say
will come
be together we just may



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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-07-23 08:38 PM


Sometimes the waiting can seem like forever. You've expressed that longing well in this!

Denise

midnightblues
Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
2 posted 2000-07-25 03:35 AM


Pining can be frustrating.....and u've said it all, dr tung! But the sweets will come......hey will there be a sequel??

love, michelle


If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

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