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Tramp Poet
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0 posted 2000-07-23 02:46 AM


Tuckered Out

Sittin' here under my shade tree
enjoyin' the breeze an' a smoke.
I'm thinkin' bout takin' a nap
just a restin' from all my recent restin'.


Football watchin' plum wore me out
pizza pie eatin' wore me to a frazzle.
I'm thinkin bout takin' a nap
just a restin' from all my recent restin'.

Sunday afternoon feels just like it should
tuckered out, count a fussin' an a messin'.
I'm thinkin' bout takin’ a nap
just a restin' from all my recent restin'.

It's been a spell since I broke a sweat
if'n I stir,  it's generally to settle a bet..
I'm thinkin' bout takin' a nap
just a restin' from all my recent restin'.

Lazy, old hound dog sleepin' next to me
wears me out just a pattin' his head.
I'm thinkin' bout takin' a nap
maybe after I've a rested a spell....



bleeding...

"Tis ink coming
from his arm,
Captain!"


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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-07-23 09:17 AM


Got a giggle out of me this morning.
Thank you for the smile.
Now .... I think I'll go back to bed
and take that nap I missed yesterday !

'just a restin' from all my recent restin'.'

I love it !
~*Marge*~


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Tramp Poet
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2 posted 2000-07-23 10:27 AM


Thank you for the chuckle, Marge!
sorry i was so slow in reply...
truth be told i was tuckered out
and now look what y'all went and
done...worked my fingers to the bone!

Now i'm a gonna have to rest up to get
back to resting...

iff'n i wasn't so scared o' needles
i'd eat by IV just to keep from havin'
to work my jaw so much with all that
chewin'...

why iff'n it wadd'ent so much work
i might just a be a...


bleeding...

"Tis ink coming
from his arm,
Captain!"


Denise
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3 posted 2000-07-23 08:43 PM


ROFL   This is hillarious, Daniel!

Denise

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4 posted 2000-07-24 01:32 AM


There ya' go, Daniel ...
nodding off in mid-sentence !

Love your sense of humor -
iffen you're so tuckered out -
who laughs for you ?

Reminds me of a funny thing my father
used to say,
"I'm so tuckered -
who's gonna shave for me this morning ?"

Gosh, you stirred that memory up from
too long ago !

Glad to know you've got 'bony fingers'!
~*Marge*~


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Tramp Poet
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5 posted 2000-07-24 10:57 AM


why i done teached our weenie
dog to laugh up a storm for me...
so's i never have to strain my heart!

shore do wish that repair man be
gettin' here to fix the motor on
my rockin' chair...

maybe i'll just moesy back
to the kitchen fo sum mo ice tea...

{snore, sputter, snore, wheeze...}


bleeding...

"Tis ink coming
from his arm,
Captain!"


Yu Lan
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since 2000-04-13
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6 posted 2000-07-25 03:08 AM


Oh, i love this one Dan.. hehe..   just brilliant.. u lazy thing.. woops, who sed that?! ^_^ love that cheeky poetry.. hehe..
Hey, u taught your dog to laugh for you?! Hehe, well isn't that a nice dog.. fancy doing all the work for you... *_^ with a sense of humour like this Daniel, u should at least have to suffer the tiring act of.. laughing!  

Luv + vote,




Lynne

"He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu



midnightblues
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7 posted 2000-07-25 04:59 AM


Smiley Smiley Vote...bleeding...how do u manage to do this? GOlly this is so entertaining!!! LOVE IT!!

love, michelle


If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

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