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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Tranquil waters flow Moving me to distant shores Rising on the tide ~*Marge*~ |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Simply beautiful Marge. I know this is one of those tankas, or haikus, or..... I don't know which, but I'm sure you've done it perfectly!!! I just love tranquil waters!! Bonnie [This message has been edited by BSC (edited 07-22-2000).] |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
What a pleasant surprise to read a haiku by you. Beautiful haiku Marge! I love it!!!  Take care, Marge of my heart, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bonnie~ On a Haiku thought Tranquil water flows your way Flooding heart with love Melissa~ Little honeybee Floats on lily flowing free Riding Haiku tide Thank you both for your kindness. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
gosh, Marge, am i glad to read this post i believe i havent read a haiku by you in ages you do know i love your poetry, dont you just continue to grce us with more such gems of haiku |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kaile~ Nice thoughts from your pen Make a happy lady smile You are a sweet man ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
pretty impressive mastering of a style that has successfully denied my attempts! especially like the way you answered in kind thanks for the serenity! ttyl, bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bleeding~ Serenity sweet Flows in calming waters deep On the shore I wait *Thanks for the reply. These little pieces can be quite addicting ... I do enjoy them. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
All of Marge's poems Bring a smile to my face And joy to my heart This would be a senryu, as it is in 5-7-5 form but isn't about nature (although that's usually what Marge's work is!). Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Marge; This is heavenly tranquility! P.S. I loved your reply and the lovely picture! Love, Ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth~ < !signature-->A smile sent with joy From good friends of my making Rests now on this face Ellie~ Angel wings bring thoughts Heavenly tranquility My sigh is complete A little Haiku A little bit Senryu Lovely thoughts of you *Thank you both for the lovely replies. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 07-23-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Ahhhh, so peaceful, Marge! Very beautifully done! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ The beating heart knows Quest of tranquil waters flow Often sailed within ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
marge, marge....this is so DELIGHTFUL!! *S* love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MidnightBlues~ Delightful water Gently flows within the soul Bringing tranquil thoughts ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Love this, Marge. Beautiful and peaceful. You have a wonderful talent for haiku. -vlraynes (vicky) "I have read your words, and within them I have found your heart. -vlraynes |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ Splendor found in words So tiny they fascinate Spreading sea's tranquil ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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