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Darkened Treasures Junior Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 18nj |
From afar your gaze finds its way to me Into thine own eyes, thine heart, thine own soul. Illuminating my life completly Filling the dark void, making my life whole The light in your eyes, the song in your voice Makes me yearn for more of what we once knew. But alas, is not mine, the one with the choice Tis for you to choose a freindship anew. You awoke in me, things I thought lost Absent for so long, unsure was the find. Willing now am I, whatever the cost For I have vowed, no longer to waste time. Too short to waste, too precious the sum Just like time lost at the Aquarium. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to Passions! This is a lovely sonnet! Please check your email for a special welcome.  |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
That's a very nice first post ! I like it a lot. Welcome to Passions  [This message has been edited by Munda (edited 07-23-2000).] |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, DT! I look forward to reading more from you! This is very nice! Denise |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Welcome to The Pub!! This is a nice tribute to a friend!! Look forward to reading more. |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
Beautiful poem! Welcome to the Pub! You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Welcome to our corner, Darkened Treasures! You seem to me to be a concealed gem! That wuz a delightful piece! I shall look forward to your future posts! *S* love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
How could I not know this was you? I am so sorry!! The AQUARIUM...duh. This is magnificant..I cannot believe my old friend has been with me here at the Pub and I didnt even recognize him. Well, I vow to never let go of such a good friend, either...This is incredible, M...Post more!!!.....beth You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
WOW! I've written a couple of sonnets and they are tricky. You have done a magnificent job on this one. Welcome! I don't know how your going to top this one, but I can't wait for more...ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Welcome indeed DT Sit right down,have a drink and be sure to post more. Jon |
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