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breezeinnc
Junior Member

since 2000-04-26

Posts 47
USA

0 posted 2000-07-21 10:28 AM

Just You and Me

Just you and me
laughing as the sea
sprays our bodies
making our clothes cling oddly
moulding
Oh so wonderful a feeling

Just You and me
running wildly with the breeze
laughing in the sun, tumbling in the heather
sharing a kiss in the beautiful weather
boldly
Oh so wonderful a feeling

Just you and Me
under a moonlit sky
stars shining
bodies touching, hearts beating
trembling
Oh so wondeful a feeling

Just you and me,
walking side by side, hand in hand
On a rainy day, a sunny day, a snowy day, a windy day
Any day
Nothing matters except the existence
Of the two people, soul within soul
You and me
Oh so wonderful a feeling.

July 2000

In Collaboration with Colleen

childomine
Senior Member

since 2000-01-25

Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL

1 posted 2000-07-21 01:01 PM

Breeze - this is so touching. If a person is in love - they feel as you've portrayed. If one isn't in love - you make them long to be.

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-07-21 07:51 PM

Very beautiful!

Denise

Lost Dreamer
Member Elite

since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

3 posted 2000-07-22 09:48 AM

What a wonderful romantic feeling I get from this poem, it's full of delightful images that just tranquilize.

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

4 posted 2000-07-22 12:19 PM

breeze--good to see you bak

and what a wonderful feeling poem..nice to be in love.....* sigh *

dg

"i speak in written word--my lips, no sound may utter..." dgvarner

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

5 posted 2000-07-25 02:54 AM

The setting...the feelings......truly beautiful, breezeinnc! What a wonderful feeling! *S* Here's my vote!

love, michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

breezeinnc
Junior Member

since 2000-04-26

Posts 47
USA

6 posted 2000-07-25 06:08 AM

Thank You all of you,
your messages give me heart

breezeinnc

kelieth
Member

since 2000-06-12

Posts 314
Normal IL - USA

7 posted 2000-07-25 11:43 AM

Great love story for all to enjoy. I look forward to reading more.

Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."

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