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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA 
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Girgling sounds nearby Light positioned like the sun Swivel chair reclines. Humungous syringe Needle seesaws back and forth Pain yields to numbness. Probing pick invades Exploring desolate site The Masked One begins. The drill hums sad tune Of varied tempo and pitch Suction tube joins in. At last silence comes Fluid flow is expelled Time for rebuilding. Large crevice decline Replacement filler packed in Scrunched down, made solid. Voids are replaced One is filled but in its place My wallet is drained! |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
David, I knew from the title I was gonna cringe at this one. Thanks for the wonderful feeling...LOL You got it so down to the precisness of every detail. I want to say wonderful job, but since you've given me the cringes so bad, I think I will just leave saying thanks alot...LOL |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
David; So this is how you have been spending that time from the computer! Ugh! You have written this poem so realistically, that I too got the chilly willies! Great job here, I can't imagine it being written any finer, despite the subject! Love ya Bro! C):?) Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
Ouch! I was just about to call the dentist for a check up...thanks for reminding me that it can wait a few more months! You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
David, Welcome back, sit in this chair right here, Relax, you won't feel a thing! Now open wide! OOOOUCH, You've hit a nerve with this one, well written but the subject matter is to gruesome for this timid soul. LOL Dennis :^( Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i have had horrible times at the dentist so i guess i wont say i enjoyed this poem...LOL  |
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Jan Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 114 |
I laughed and cringed--and definately relate! |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
OOooh David! This piece squeezed all tha laffs outta mi!!! Fantastically witty and humorous! So envious *S* love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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