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a_little_girl
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since 2000-05-08
Posts 307
San Alejandro, HI, USA

0 posted 2000-07-21 12:20 PM


Well the little dragon and I won't be able to see each other for a few months so here's my goodbye poem dedicated to those who loved and lost due to distance.  

As I looked into your eyes,
and you looked into mine,
all meaning had lost time,
we had exchanged goodbyes.

On January 29th we had met,
and fell in something called love.
Our destiny was set,
for I knew that you're from above.

I knew that someday you'd go away.
But you have my heart,
and in it you'll stay...


Well (tears streaming by this time) I'll miss you little purple dragon...     
--the little one





[This message has been edited by a_little_girl (edited 07-21-2000).]

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Lady Lost
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since 2000-07-13
Posts 470

1 posted 2000-07-21 08:08 AM


I am sorry for your loss, just remember that the world can never come between true love.  Distance and time can only strengthen the bond of true love that two hearts share...hang in there! (I wasn't trying to rhyme...hehe)

You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore

Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow
2 posted 2000-07-22 09:43 AM


Little girl, This is so touchingly sad, I hope time flies for you so that together again you both will be.
chibi_dragon
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since 2000-07-04
Posts 58

3 posted 2000-07-22 04:07 PM


Wow. Heartache can be rather powerful. This is some excellent work, little girl!!    
--Chibi

midnightblues
Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
4 posted 2000-07-25 02:58 AM


*Sigh* You've got me feeling blue with your beautiful poem......Hope that you'll both be reunited soon!

love, michelle


If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

a_little_girl
Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307
San Alejandro, HI, USA
5 posted 2000-12-27 11:35 AM


Well we are able to get together on weekends sometimes. He is a REALLY nice friend of mine.


"My soul lives in love, walks with serenity, and dies in violence."
--ALG


Munda
Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
6 posted 2000-12-27 04:14 PM


Yep, the little dragon is surely very special. I hope you'll get back together again soon. Great poem too  
kcsgrandma
Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
7 posted 2000-12-27 05:43 PM


It's hard being separated from people you love.  Hope time flies for you.  

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

8 posted 2000-12-27 07:07 PM


This is very sad  
I'm with Kscgrandma, it is hard being seperated from people you love. Just hang in there ok?

Maree

"If my words could blanket the skies
and fill every corner and crevice of
this earth, still this wouldn't be enough"
"Maree Russo"


pegasus111
Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
9 posted 2000-12-28 05:54 PM


parting is indeed a sweet sorrow..but, on the morrow...

love those morrows!!

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


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