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PhaerieChild
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since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787
Aloha, Oregon

0 posted 2000-07-19 09:29 PM




            Thanks!!!


Sittin' at my favorite truck stop
Drinkin' in coffee and rugged ambience.
Watchin' trucks rollin' in and out,
Doin' a kind of eighteen wheel dance.

Lined up at the fuelin' lanes,
Pumpin' diesel into cavernous tanks.
Payin' big bucks at the fuel desk,
With a card, a smile, maybe a thanks.

Truckers waitin' on much needed showers,
Sittin' in the restaurant waiting to be called.
Drinkin' their cup 'o' joe and tellin' tales.
Some are serious, but most ribald.

Sometimes weary car-travellers
Stop to rest, have a little bite to eat.
Some like me, are town locals,
Comin' for a decent place to meet.

Out the window, through wooden blinds
Are six lanes of concrete I-84 highway
Beyond is the green of Les Bois tree tops
Even further are suburbs, mountains and blue skyway.

I'm wonderin' where all those roads might lead
That seem to just kiss the horizon.
How many truckers have been over them?
Many an angel must be shotgun ridin'.

I finish my coffee and pay a foot weary waitress
Go out to my car and drive by those big ol' tanks.
I try to remember what life would be if not for them.
So here and now I'd like to give all those truckers....
A GREAT BIG THANKS!!!


By Wild*Child    T/A (Burns Bros. Truck Stop)
                                        Exit 54 on I-84  Boise


Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho



© Copyright 2000 Shawna R. Holder - All Rights Reserved
BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
1 posted 2000-07-20 10:10 PM


Wild Child - This is great!!! I've never thought to thank those guys (and gals) for the job they do....but I'm sure if they weren't out there doing their job, we'd all notice in one heck of a hurry, and have plenty to say.  Terrific job.  Bonnie

[This message has been edited by BSC (edited 07-20-2000).]

childomine
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL
2 posted 2000-07-21 01:15 PM


I've known truckers and I've been the weary traveler pulling over at a truck stop to rest.  Your description is awesomely accurate.  I too never thought to say thanks.  Good job on this.

...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is....
Black Eagle
Oglala Sioux holy man


Tramp Poet
Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754
Could Be Anywhere...
3 posted 2000-07-22 03:07 AM


so been hanging out at Burns, eh?

advoiding the cosmix Ferris Fairest/
Alley Lost/Merritts thang?

is that little place on Federal Way
that serves the plate sized hamburgers
still there?

and thank you...Ma'am


bleeding...

"Tis ink coming
from his arm,
Captain!"


PhaerieChild
Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787
Aloha, Oregon
4 posted 2000-07-22 03:25 AM


Yes, brother dear 'o' mine it is still there but not on Federal Way. Now it is up the road apiece at I-84 and Broadway and they rebuilt it. It's a very nice place. Since I don't work at Merritt's anymore I don't go in there anymore. That was enough crap for me. Really like the new job!! Oh and yes they still have them plate sized hamburgers!!

Bonnie and childomine...thanks for reading. I've been meeting a few  of these people and they are a great bunch!!

Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho



midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
5 posted 2000-07-22 01:51 PM


WildChild,  ur poem made me feel soooooo good! There's this heart-warming ambience and delightful feeling surging inside me and I really like it! *S*

love, michelle


If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

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