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midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
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0 posted 2000-07-19 08:44 AM


don take this seriously...hahaha haf a goot laff and tats it!

love, michelle

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a little bit of me died
the day he turned away
i found it hard to reminisce
for all that left was pain

many years later
he came back into my life
needless to say
following shameless lies

this little bit of me
came back to haunt
telling myself
now you can be strong

one slap here and another kick there
wondering where i got the dare  
then suddenly i realise
this little bit of me
has come back to life!



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kaile
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since 2000-02-06
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1 posted 2000-07-21 09:02 PM


You had me rooting for that little bit of you...was thrilled to find out that the little bit had taught that man a well-deserved lesson and was no longer miserable

LOL on the line: one slap here and another kick there

midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
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2 posted 2000-07-22 01:04 PM


Thanks kaile! Mmmm tat wuz mi fav line too! *winkZ*

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

dr tung
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 55
singapore
3 posted 2000-07-23 12:05 PM


hey, i was never keen on reading poems althoughh i like writing them, anyway since i see u've been constantly leaving encouraging comments for my works i guess i should too.
well this is a rather cheeky poem i find, very light and easy to digest...

midnightblues
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4 posted 2000-07-23 04:09 AM


Thanks dr tung! tat wuz so sweet of u......well i'm not of a gal of profound literature...so most of my poems are this simple.....nevertheless there are lots of nice ppl in corner pub that encourages mi on...so Thanks!! *S*

love, michelle


If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

kelieth
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since 2000-06-12
Posts 314
Normal IL - USA
5 posted 2000-07-25 02:25 AM


Glad to hear you were able to be strong in the situation.  I'm sorry to hear hurt has ever payed a part before and glad to see it made you even stronger.  Great way of putting it down.  Exellently written.

Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."

midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
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6 posted 2000-07-25 12:00 PM


kevin kevin...i always brighten up reading your comments! lookin forward to ur posts!!! *S* Thanks friend!

love, michelle


If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

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