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This is your pilot speaking LOL

Wobbly Head Bob
Member

since 2000-05-15

Posts 299
Virginia, USA

0 posted 2000-07-18 06:01 PM

Sail on my dearsest Destiny to reach your yonder shore
from this day the winds will sway
your sails forever more.
Fate is held within your Dreams so keep them close to heart
this I say and come what may
hold tightly every part.
Land upon me Faith is near warm water swept the bow calming bay the sky so grey
whilst I did keep my vow.

*This isn't done, its a work done in...oh about 5 minutes, so I'll keep revising it, this is missing a lot of meat but I think its skeleton is looking descent..let me know what'cha think.*

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

1 posted 2000-07-18 08:38 PM

Yes..it shows promise to be sure...I'll keep checking back as you add the 'meat'!

Gossamerwings
Member

since 2000-07-18

Posts 207

2 posted 2000-07-18 10:39 PM

Well, so far the soup
and the salad are very
nicely served up!
I will check back for
the meat and potatoes.

Gossamerwings ;)

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

3 posted 2000-07-19 12:19 PM

i agree..however, i think theres ALREADY a little "meat" in there!

dg

"i speak in written word--my lips, no sound may utter..." dgvarner

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

4 posted 2000-07-19 07:29 AM

MMmmm meat or no meat, I still relished it...*S*

love, michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

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