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Tranquil Coma-(Lost Dreamers Challenge) |
ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Ther are two < !signature-->splashing water fountains, surrounded by every color of impatient. The tea roses are blooming pink. Tranquility abounds. The white lattice arbor is a bloom with purple climatis. The tranquility fills my being. Stargazer lilies and petunias of white and deep purple and pink, fragrance supreme. It's all so lovely that I'm almost in a tranquil coma! Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL [This message has been edited by ellie LeJeune (edited 07-16-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very very beautiful, Ellie! You've painted such a lovely picture of tranquility! Challenge well met! Denise |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Ellie, Your tranquil coma is contagious, and addictive. What a beautiful place you describe. Thanks for meeting the challenge and taking me to your wonderful tranquilness. |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
very beautiful and tranquil well written ...stargazer lilies hmmmm never heard of them before now intrigued by the name ... off to search the web to see if I can find a picture of 'em ... then I might just have to order some seeds? bulbs? lol |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Quite tranquil and so very lovely this place you write....very nice!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
So very pretty, ellie! hmm I'll haf to think twice bout posting mine....*S* If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
What a beautiful poem..the words flow so graciously... Another wonderful poem from a wonderful poet! You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Dear Ellie, WOW! what a beautiful tranquil scene you have painted here with your words. I can smell the flowers!! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
not being in that lovely place you have described, i may not be in a tranquil coma now but a smile this poem definitely brought me thx for sharing what's dear to you |
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