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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2000-07-16 04:08 PM


Ther are two
splashing water
fountains,
surrounded by
every color of
impatient.
The tea roses
are blooming pink.

Tranquility abounds.

The white lattice arbor
is a bloom with purple
climatis.

The tranquility fills
my being.

Stargazer lilies
and petunias of white
and deep purple and pink,
fragrance supreme.

It's all so lovely
that
I'm almost in
a
tranquil coma!
< !signature-->

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.  
    
eL


[This message has been edited by ellie LeJeune (edited 07-16-2000).]

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Denise
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1 posted 2000-07-16 04:12 PM


Very very beautiful, Ellie! You've painted such a lovely picture of tranquility! Challenge well met!  

Denise

Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow
2 posted 2000-07-16 08:20 PM


Ellie, Your tranquil coma is contagious, and addictive. What a beautiful place you describe. Thanks for meeting the challenge and taking me to your wonderful tranquilness.  
StarrGazer
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since 2000-03-05
Posts 679
Texas
3 posted 2000-07-16 10:56 PM


very beautiful and  tranquil well written ...stargazer lilies hmmmm never heard of them before now intrigued by the name ... off to search the web to see if I can find a picture of 'em ... then I might just have to order some seeds? bulbs? lol  
Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
4 posted 2000-07-17 07:10 AM


Quite tranquil and so very lovely this place you write....very nice!!
Bridgette  


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midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
5 posted 2000-07-17 07:25 AM


So very pretty, ellie! hmm I'll haf to think twice bout posting mine....*S*

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

Lady Lost
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since 2000-07-13
Posts 470

6 posted 2000-07-17 09:12 AM


What a beautiful poem..the words flow so graciously...

Another wonderful poem from a wonderful poet!

You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
7 posted 2000-07-17 12:01 PM


Dear Ellie,
  WOW! what a beautiful tranquil scene you have painted here with your words. I can smell the flowers!!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

kaile
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since 2000-02-06
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singapore
8 posted 2000-07-19 01:38 AM


not being in that lovely place you have described, i may not be in a tranquil coma now but a smile this poem definitely brought me

thx for sharing what's dear to you

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