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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) 
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It must be you < !signature-->I cannot conceive of another Not another for me do I see With you is the only place For myself I do believe If only I had stopped For just a second of time I would have never told you That you were not mine My ears they did listen To all but my heart Head full of confusion Laid deep inside the lag All the logics of a mind Brought on by another Not within my soul This love is yours To no one else at all Belonging to you only Not able to explain Nor do I understand But these feelings I have Are yours to be always If I am never married Or no children of my own I will never regret loving you For my heart you call your own "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown [This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 07-16-2000).] |
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chibi_dragon Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 58 |
This...is...possibly the best poem that I've ever seen about love...  Good Job!!--Chibi |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Bridgette! Denise |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Justbleu, really beautiful. "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else" faster-Manic street preachers. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Justbleu,lucky your soulmate who gets to receive such unconditional devoting love...lovely piece here like these lines muchly: My ears they did listen To all but to my heart a timely reminder to us all that sometimes we should just follow our instincts btw, Sven has tried your challenge for "maybe in distance but never in heart" and has posted it here..this inspired me somehow to have a go at the challenge phrase again...have wriiten another one posted under "my first attempt at rhyming"... looking forward for your poem for that phrase [This message has been edited by kaile (edited 07-16-2000).] |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
My Chibi...That is such a wonderful compliment...what an honor!! Thank You!! And for it to be called "Beautiful" is sooo cool too!!! Thanks Denise and Brian!! Oh well said...Kaile....We should always go with our instincts, intuition, gut feelings...etc.!!! A lesson I hope I've learned!! Thank You too!! "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
This poem is so sad and so beautifully romantic and very lovely, Ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Such strong feelings u portray in this piece, I admire the character in the poem, Justbleu! *S* touching If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Justbleu, I love this poem, it's so full of true love and beauty. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Thank You all sooo much for your sweet comments....you all seem to enjoy my "Mushy Love Stuff" poetry!!!! I'm glad you do!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
A love so strong is always good. I admire your devotion. Great piece. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Yes...I do so agree kevin!!! Thank You!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
Very well written Good Job!!!! |
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