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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Prismatic Crystal You brandished me in all your adventures, sloping my mind to reach your realm of destination, and fascinating decorum. Trading of smiles, and floating laughter, reigned among the pleasured tranquility, brought about by your gentle harboring. Why did the sunshine suddenly fade away, did I detonate an explosion of expressions worst? Do my oceanographic waves still crest high, or have I been washed away by the lowest? My hand held out in wonder of acceptance, was the honesty real enough or was it broken in tiny pieces of prismatic crystal destined to fade? |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Gloria, What a wondrous assembly of imagery used in this poem! WOW! I like this a lot! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
This is so romantic and written like a Dali painting with words that melt and flow to intice the senses. Fascinating! Ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. ell |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Wow LD the images this brings with it is amazing. Great poem. Bonnie |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
Wow. This is some good work. Keep it up!!   --the little one |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Dear LD this is astounding!*S* Trading of smiles, and floating laughter, reigned among the pleasured tranquility, brought about by your gentle harboring. This stanza is glorious! Smiles, laughter, tranquility and gentle harboring......such a delightful array of priceless gifts from God! If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
WOW STUNNING IMAGERY AMAZING POEM. You are right the latest poems are deep very deep and wonderful. Quitely in awe. "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else" faster-Manic street preachers. [This message has been edited by brian madden (edited 07-15-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I agree! Wonderful, Gloria!  Denise |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Gloria, you have some excellent images here WOW! |
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