navwin » Archives » The Corner Pub » The Day
The Corner Pub
Post A Reply Post New Topic The Day Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
EroseGrover
Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 44
SD,CA 92126

0 posted 2000-07-12 07:09 AM


The Sunrise beams extrodinary
colors through our sky

Sunshine fills our blessed land
and warms our naked hand

the clouds up above bring
more love to the day

The sweet wind blows so
swiftly and sleek bringing
our mind to a calm

As the Sunset brings our day adiu
it brings the blessed night sky with it to.


© Copyright 2000 EroseGrover - All Rights Reserved
midnightblues
Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
1 posted 2000-07-12 07:13 AM


I wish I could write like that...Simply love your style! I seem to appreciate nature only in my mind...but not in my words! Envious... *S*

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

essenceofangels
Junior Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 36

2 posted 2000-07-12 09:16 AM


What a lovely poem it express alot of things in just a hadfull of words!I fully enjoyed it cant wait to see more!

                essenceofangels

Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
3 posted 2000-07-12 08:18 PM


Lovely imagery! Enjoyed this...    
kaile
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Ascendant
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146
singapore
4 posted 2000-07-12 11:13 PM


gosh ,you must be an easy-going nature-lover...like the way you appreciate and come to terms with Mother Nature

pls keep posting...i like nature poems but sad to say, i havent been inspired to write one yet

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » The Corner Pub » The Day

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary