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EroseGrover
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since 2000-07-09
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0 posted 2000-07-12 06:58 AM


Yesterday the clouds cried
above our bare heads
leaving us thinking and without a care

Today I see a day with great hope
sweet scents of rose
drifft through our nose

Tomarrow I say will be a great day
for my Mind will be in the clouds
and for that will be the day
my soul burns with great passion.


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midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
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1 posted 2000-07-12 07:03 AM


Golly I love this! All trivial thought of the day comes together in this piece! Keep posting! *S*

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kaile
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2 posted 2000-07-12 11:06 PM


i like this positive, optimistic faith the speaker holds towards the future...embrace the unknown...i do hope i will remember that
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2000-07-15 01:58 PM


Erose~
Enjoyed the hope of this one.

'Today I see a day with great hope'

~*Marge*~



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