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Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
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Michigan, U.S.A.

0 posted 2000-07-11 05:36 AM


Sleepy fog tendrils
Stretched across the new morn sky
Chased away by Sun

© Copyright 2000 Dennis L. White - All Rights Reserved
ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
1 posted 2000-07-11 06:18 AM


Bro; Do your talents never cease? This is very lovely. Sis

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

ell

midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
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Singapore
2 posted 2000-07-12 07:28 AM


Simply beautiful! An exquisite portrayal of the morn... Every waking-up each day won't be so hard for me if I paste ur words by my bedside! *S*

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

kaile
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singapore
3 posted 2000-07-12 10:12 PM


and a brand new day awaits!!!
this uplifts my spirits,it does!

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
4 posted 2000-07-12 10:54 PM


i love this idea of morning!  awesome..
i agree with midnightblues--i'll have to paste this one on my eyelids so i'll read it when i dont want to get up in the morning!!  

heehee..this is more like me (in a flash..):

groggily i moan
as i fall upon the floor
of an early morn

dg

"A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2000-07-15 01:26 PM


Dennis~
This is perfect !
You master this technique with ease.

Fog shrouds the morning
Breathtaking dawn awakens
Daybreak is complete

~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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