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Sven
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0 posted 07-10-2000 11:47 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sven

Line
     by
        Line

Word  
     by
        Word

Day
     by
        Day

This
     is
        all

This
     is
        me

See?

Heart on sleeve
Led by emotion
A little naive?
Maybe. . .
Played a fool?
Sometimes. . .
Hurt by others?
Usually. . .
Happy?
       . . . yes. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

© Copyright 2000 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
kaile
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1 posted 07-11-2000 03:04 AM       View Profile for kaile   Email kaile   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kaile

it does take a happy, self-assured man to be able to pen down these delighful,funky poetic gems!!
Marina
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2 posted 07-11-2000 12:59 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

This is very different kind of writing for you.  The ending is happy, but there is something in the middle that is sad.

Marina


It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley

Denise
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3 posted 07-11-2000 09:55 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is great, Sven! I love it!

Denise
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4 posted 07-11-2000 10:46 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

The style is a little unusual for you, but I like it.  Nice form and I think you say a lot in just a few words.  Great writing, Sven.  

Lone Wolf


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats
midnightblues
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5 posted 07-12-2000 07:00 AM       View Profile for midnightblues   Email midnightblues   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit midnightblues's Home Page   View IP for midnightblues

Been hurt b4 but emerged stronger and wiser...I can relate to this...pain and agony and yet no-regrets...*S*

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™
Sven
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6 posted 07-13-2000 12:18 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Thank you my friends. . . glad that you liked it. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 07-15-2000 01:56 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Sven~
You are uniquely YOU !
What a joy for us all.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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love the format here
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